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love the multiple languages <3

Beautiful! Thanks for sharing!

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spent a good time playing around on this one. beautiful game :)

at twilight today
the cradle, back and forth
for what?
because we are darkness
no one is bleeding under the stars

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Thanks for playing and sharing! The all-English version also looks and sounds beautiful... differently from the collage version! That's so interesting :) 

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Beautiful poem! Interesting choice to make it consistent in language!

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see as a dev and a poet i love when devs make small experiences like this that end up forming these fun pocket communities :) thanks for making this and putting it out there

I too! Very glad I made this haha

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Thanks for playing and sharing! Beautiful :)

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I thought this was quite fun!

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This is so beautiful! A lot of interesting combinations. Thanks for playing and sharing!

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Beautiful! Thanks for sharing

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so good -- love the layering effect of keeping all these languages (that i don't speak) in my head, and not understanding all the nuanced meanings i might be creating with words i don't know, ripped from their linguistic context. very exciting idea, executed beautifully :)


here's my poem!

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Ahhhhh thank you so much for the compliments!! I was so happy to read them. Glad that you liked it! Text/language collage has been on my mind for a while since a part of me always do that daily, so I ended up pouring a lot into this project. Beautiful poem, too! It makes my day seeing art getting created out of my smol thingy :)

I am very interested by the idea of international poem.

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Make one!